Sunday, September 03, 2006

HEY PEOPLE

thanks for waiting
this is the song
written by me
written from scratch
so there is no tune to it
=( thats what the song lacks
a nice tune to go with it

here goes

我好想离开地球
让我去月亮一趟
忘掉所有烦恼
在月亮多美好

离开这残酷世界
去找嫦娥姐姐
跟她说声haiyo
看着太阳和星星
全部烦恼都洗清


就算我飞到月球
我也不会久留
等我回来的一天
和朋友再见面
他们的笑脸
是我一生的思念


chorus
和朋友过的日子
我一个人无法忘记
就算到多远
我也要回来
这段友情我永远不放弃

我好想离开地球
在一旁慢慢死去
把一切都忘掉
人死了多美好

离开这陌生世界
去找可怕死神
陪他喝咖啡提神
跟贪吃鬼抢吃的
和色鬼一起疯狂

就算有一天死去
我也不会放弃
变成小鬼回地球
和朋友再见面
他们的笑脸
是我一生的思念


chorus
和朋友过的日子
我一个人无法忘记
就算到多远
我也要回来
这段友情我永远不放弃

就算地球有多远
我也有回来的一天
如果再也不回来
我祝福我的朋友
有个完美的夏天




我好想离开地球
by haoting

hope u guys like it
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by the way
gang= jian gang
the last song is written by jian gang
not me
ht= haoting
which is me


if u like my work
please share it with your friends
so that i can get more comments
so that i can improve

yup
thanks guys
hope u guys like my work


---haoting signing off

p.s song edited on 27 september 2007

Comments:
nice song bout friends but it got me thinking why you still want to go moon and leave your friend. XD
maybe can bring your friend along next time~ (:
 
hahah和色鬼一起疯狂 funny sia...
its nice la jus sad got no tune to follow it....
 
hahahaha very nice (: hahaha u care for ur friends so much sia!! (:
 
actually your song quite cute. but seems abit contradicting to me. cos you talk about how you wna fly to the moon. and then you talk about how you wna fly back. or isit sppsed to be torn btwn the two. okay i donno but anyhows great job chowhaoting.
 
gonna make so criticisms. hope you dont mind.

good points
-fresh approach
-creative i.e.links to chang'er and tan chi gui etc.

bad points
-no rhyming. rhymes would make it sound better
-there's no progression in the lyrics. its like a lot of different ideas anyhow rojak inside.

just comments. hope you dont mind.
 
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